Lost and Found (Friday Fictioneers #6)

A picture prompt, a 100-word story that links dozens of awesome writer bloggers! Thank you, Rochelle Wishoff-Fields!

Photo prompt – Copyright: Douglas McIlroy

Nero is gone. His absence is a tangible thing, messing with my insides. It feels like a death of a person—debilitating pain then numbing hollowness. A rusty coin flipping around at will.

I look around frantically. What now? He’s nowhere? Nothing?

Suddenly, I become restless. I rush into the shed and put the box of hodgepodge, on-the-way-out stuff on the working bench. A moment ago they were nothing, too. I will change that.

That I can do.

75 words

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Only yesterday, I read a heart-wrenching story/tribute to a pet gone by my writer friend Effrosyni Moschoudi (here’s her blog post). I read that after an uplifting visit to another writer friend, Nicholas Rossis, whose own dog stole my heart. I’m not really a dog person, but this week’s story had to be about person’s best friend. (Had to politically rectify the term.) Here are my friends with their beloved pets. Nerina is a living memory, Meli is a sweet physical presence. My story is about creating something from (visibly) nothing.

Effrosyni and Nerina
Nicholas and Meli

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Comments

12 responses to “Lost and Found (Friday Fictioneers #6)”

  1. Effrosyni Moschoudi Avatar

    Loved your little story and thank you for mentioning Nerina and yesterday’s post. Excuse me now, I have to go open my diary and look up ‘hodgepodge’ – LOL 😀

    1. MM Jaye Avatar
      MM Jaye

      A double thank-you, Fros, for inspiring this week’s story!

  2. FabricatingFiction Avatar

    Your explanation made me reread your story which then brought a lump to my throat. Nicely done.

    1. MM Jaye Avatar
      MM Jaye

      Thank you, Louise! I loved your story as well!

  3. Nicholas C. Rossis Avatar

    That’s sweet – both the story and the exposition 🙂

    Thanks for including Meli, I’m flattered! 🙂

  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Building a tribute for your lost dog.. what a sweet thing to do.

  5. aliciajamtaas Avatar

    This is a grand tribute to a lost pet. Sadly we have lost many kitties and there’s always a tiny hole left in the heart. What a perfect take on the prompt.

  6. Mike Avatar

    If you every lost a good pet, you feel like your story. Nicely written.

  7. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Maria,

    Losing a pet is as painful as losing any loved one. You’ve written a fitting tribute to pet lovers. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  8. Sandra Avatar

    A moving little tale.

  9. Margaret Avatar

    What a nice idea to try to reverse the feeling of annihilation. A wonderful story.

  10. Snow's Fissures and Fractures Avatar

    Very touching and so close to home.

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