HAPPY NEW YEAR, ALL!
I hope that the first day of January was a teaser of what this year has in store for you. And I hope you’re really really excited! But before we experience the events, surprises and life lessons of 2015, let’s revel in that tingling sensation of anticipation.
Isn’t the anticipation of what’s to come—that adrenaline-inducing, right-before moment— sometimes more thrilling than the actual event? That’s what romance and urban fantasy author, Amanda Byrne, thought when she came up with No Kiss Blogfest: a meme for posting the scene from a published book or WIP where the couple almost kiss; where the tension burns hot, but something or someone gets in the way of it getting out of hand.
I’m taking part with a scene from Fate Captured, a prequel to Fate Accompli, which I’m currently penning. I won’t introduce the scene. Let’s see how it works:
The coast guard disappeared inside the health center.
Trish couldn’t make out Markos’ face in the darkness, but she felt him draw back and exit the vehicle. He then opened her door and stepped aside.
She got out, stooping slightly as she knew that any effort to stand tall would make her fold in pain, but she managed to look up and smile. “Are you in any shape to play the part of the gentleman?”
Markos gave a half smile. “I’m always in shape to play the part of the gentleman.” He offered her the elbow of his strong arm. “Shall we?” he said in a too formal tone.
You’d think they were about to enter a ballroom instead of the local health center. As patients.
Trish burst out laughing but instantly regretted it, folding in two. “Oh, you’re mean!” she cried, her face a mask between pain and mirth.
He chuckled and helped her up. “Trust me, if I had my way, I’d lift you in my arms and carry you inside.” He pointed to his bad arm. “But I can’t do it single-handedly, no matter how much I’d like to impress you.”
Trish’s heart swelled. That man was drop-dead gorgeous, incredibly brave and kept saying the right things at the right time. Even when his intention was to rile her up. She could so see herself falling for him.
“You’ve already impressed me for good.”
In the darkness, his gaze was so intense, she felt a tingle run down her spine. He tucked a stray strand behind her ear and then stroked the contour of her chin with his knuckle.
“That’s my line.” His voice could melt butter.
If a simple caress stunned her to the point of numbing her mind, how would a kiss feel?
She closed her eyes, trying to focus on what he’d said.
His hand left her chin and came to rest on her lower back, pulling her in. Reflexively, she placed both her hands on his hard chest. “You saved my life.” He cocked his head as if seizing her up. “You didn’t stop to think the implications. You jumped right in! Her eyes snapped open just as his large hands—the one attached to the bad arm included—gripped her shoulders hard. “You could have been gravely injured.” His face and eyes were now hard; almost scary. He tightened his grip and shook her once. “In fact, what is a foreign girl doing alone on an island halfway around the world, working the night shift at a remote bar and then jumping thugs? Are you that imprudent? You could have been killed!”
Trish didn’t know about killed, but buzzkilled she was.
With a snap, outward move of her hands, she extricated herself from his hold.
“Imprudent? Who did you learn your English from? Your great-grandmother?” she spat out. “And how would you call getting plastered—oh, sorry, foxed I meant—effectively bringing your defenses down when you clearly have unfinished business with the mob? Prudent?”
Markos closed the space between them.
“What I do on my island is my own business.”
She drew up, bringing her nose an inch from his. “Whereas a foreigner, much less a foreign girl has no such right, right?”
Markos’ jaw was so clenched she thought it would shatter, but his eyes told a different story.
Now. He would kiss her now.
“Are you two stepping in to be treated or not?”
They both turned at the same time. The coast guard’s dark form cast a long shadow over the health center’s threshold.
Markos jerked his chin. “Go ahead.”
She crossed her arms over her chest, ignoring the fire burning her wound. “Age before beauty,” she said, smiling sweetly.
Markos eyed her for a moment and then strode toward his friend. But not before she saw the corners of his mouth lift in a barely-there smile.
Seriously, I don’t know how I will make a Clean (apart from the Spicy) version out of these two. They’re getting naughtier by the, well, page.
Feel free to make any comment you wish as this is an unedited WIP. If that whetted your appetite for more almost-kisses, visit Amanda’s blog where you’ll find all participating authors’ scenes.
Fate Accompli is now out on Amazon in two heat versions. The links below will take you directly to your Amazon store.
Fate Accompli Spicy: getBook.at/FateSpicy
Fate Accompli Clean: getBook.at/FateClean
If you’d like to read the first chapters of Fate Accompli, they’re available on Wattpad. (4,000 views and counting…)
15 thoughts on “New Year’s Teaser – Don’t Kiss, But Do Tell!”
Mmmm… that sounds delicious…
Thanks, Angel! Happy New Year with great success to your Greek Isles mystery romances!
Sign me up for the racy version 😉
LOL! You bet, Ekaterina! Thanks for stopping by!
There’s some serious chemistry in that snippet. Nice work!
Markos is an idiot. I love how it swings from one end of the spectrum to the other in the matter of a few sentences. This sounds steamy and exciting!
:D! Markos is an alpha, and Greek at that! He certainly pushes all Trish’s wrong (and right) buttons. Thanks for stopping by, Amanda!
I love that Trish doesn’t let Markos get away with anything in this scene. She’s definitely got the right amount of backbone/spunk to match him!
It wouldn’t work any other way! Thanks for taking the time to comment, Amalia! I really enjoyed your scene from Beyond Fate!
My pleasure! and thank you for saying so! 🙂
Nicely done–all spice and fire.
I feel a little bad grinning over Trish not giving him an inch when they’re both injured. great scene, though.
Oh what a tease! More please!
You definitely have some tension working through this, Maria 😉 Great little excerpt!